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I just want to say that you guys are the most with-it, held together mod team I've played under. There's no sense of burnout, no under-the-surface drama, and you guys manage to keep the game active plot-wise while not being all that overwhelming. You're also approachable, and I feel like if I ever have a concern, I can actually come up and voice my mind on it, which is something I haven't been able to do in any of my other games, including the one I briefly modded in myself.
You guys are awesome, all of you. Thank you for helping to make this game as fantastic as it is.
As people who follow my plurk have noticed, I've been having. A reaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaallly hard time getting any sort of focus in this game. I'm not sure how much people outside of myself can help me with this, but maybe hearing some feedback could be a boot to the flank in getting moving again? IDK.
I dunno what to say that I haven't said on Plurk to you about this, but I'll reiterate that the biggest problem with playing Fourth Wall aware characters in a panfandom jamjar is that sometimes you'll be expected or assumed to recognize a thing that you, as a player, have no interest in.
Really, there's no easy way around that fact except to either feign interest (ie "spend a few hours on Wikipedia and TV Tropes until you can adequately bullshit your way out of the paper bag") or to not worry about defying those assumptions. It it doesn't bother you as a player, then you'll be more likely to keep on rolling in spite of the few speed bumps.
Past that, Jack certainly has more potential than you give him credit for - by now he's been here at least half a year, so it's pretty safe to assume he's got a set routine he does every day that keeps him going, even in the absence of a MayJ. After all, he IS a Harvest Moon protag, so he should be used to weaving in and out of other people's lives based on their schedules. Maybe figuring out what exactly his daily routine is will help you figure out some things to do with him or places to tag him out?
Am I playing either of them badly or too blandly? Be sure to let me know.
Anon comments are fine and both characters have their own personal HMDs (IP Logging off, anon enabled and comments screened) if you don't want to reply on here.
I will openly admit I was uncertain about Tails for a little bit there around the time of his breakdown - I worried that he didn't have enough of what made him unique as a character.
But then I've seen his interactions recently with Sonic and now Knuckles and Cream, and I realize that all you really needed were some canonmates to bounce off of to get the full feeling. As of such, there's nothing really to critique any more, just a general thumbs up. With a hoof.
Shaun | Gentarou Kisaragi, Ako Shirabe, Pinkie Pie EG, Flash Sentry EG and Lyra Heartstrings SN
Ako is already far removed from her original canon via Mayfield, and Pinkie is undergoing a life-changing moment. As it stands I wouldn't mind feedback on how derpy I'm getting.
Can I just say how much I've adored the Gentarou/Hain CR? It's so RARE to see Fourze with negative CR and watching him get driven to near-rage is a thing of marvelous, marvelous beauty.
I also like what you do with Lyra, though I admit that maybe she's had a few too many antics with things in the Archives at this point, so it's probably best if she cuts back a bit. (Or possibly if it's explored that she's kind of gotten herself addicted, in kind of a "magical otherworldy artifacts are awesome, MUST HAVE MORE" way)
I haven't really interacted too much with the other three, so I can't properly offer in-depth thoughts.
I will admit, Hiro never quite gelled with me, but in time I realized that was an issue on my end, not yours - he's just not my type of character. At the same time, I did like the interaction I had with him, and he really came into his own on that Griffon plot... for better or worse. He kinda shot himself in the hoof, but that's kind of a flaw in settings that are more idealistic than Heroes is.
Trixie is basically an extension of yourself, as I have said many times, and I still enjoy the presence of the Flutters, though sometimes your sentence structure kinda goes loose and it's harder to focus on your tags. Again, I think it's more me being a stickler for grammar than anything you're doing wrong. Regardless, pointing out my two cents in case it's something you yourself have been thinking about.
NON-HELPFUL DIAMOND TIARA MODE: Cut that Kyubey stuff on Plurk out, it's kinda annoying. :V
I've been struggling the past few weeks to focus; am I going too slow for anyone to tolerate? Feel free to tell me so. I'm fairly confident on voices, so if there's inconsistencies feel free to point those out, too.
...can you really get on the case of a shallow, obsessed character for being shallow and obsessed? I mean, Brainstorm seems to me like a one-trick pony both ICly and from what I've seen of his canon, with that one trick being "SCIENCE!!!1" with varying levels of explosion, so you're doing good with him. I also enjoy the CR we have going, though both of us need to pick that up a bit and have BS and Hain actually begrudgingly talking like we keep hinting at.
Yes, I do know I have a few problems with Nozomi and shunting her into the spotlight at the expense of the other, but please tell me if there are others.
Aside from what's already said, I think your Sonic and Derpy are still pretty good. I would like to see Caliburn react more since Sonic still has him with, but that's just me.
We're always play Nozomi and MayTwi together, so it's interesting to see how these two interact, especially with recent events. I need to figure out a way to get the rest of my guys interacting with the others, though...!
YOU HAVE A VERY DISTORTED SENSE OF HUBRIS ACTUALLY but let's not get into that. We've danced that dance many a time.
Tagging out with people other than Dash and Zetta seems to in general be a weakness for you; you only seem to do such when forced to (via AC requirements) or when there's existing relationships (Flare/Dust, Morgan/Nephenee, Boo/Vinyl when they were both in the game). Don't be afraid of being a little pushy! We won't bite, and all of your characters are well-played and compelling!
I know I'm having a bit of trouble keeping up with tags right now but I'm working on it as best I can while settling into a new routine with how work is changing. also having more hours than usual which is GOOD but also cuts out a lot of free time
Sorry I've been slow recently, I'm still trying to figure out how to balance my time to include playing here. You've all been great and thank you for playing with me so far ^_^
I got reimu here as well as my OC Fennel Famicorn. I am planning to app Asagi Asagiri this weekend too(I would have earlier, but stuff happened which I will explain below)
First off, I want to say, I am really sorry for how much I have slowed down in the past few months. I used to be able to tag at work, and did a lot there... but I got caught, and dreamwidth has been blocked(along with many other sites) Now I can only tag at home, or sometimes at work through my phone. As such, I don't get as much time, and I mis tags a lot because of this. I am really trying to get a good system going, and if anyone has any suggestions on how to not miss tags, that would be great.
Othere then that, I would love some input on my Reimu, or my Fennel. I want to play a bit better, and your guys input helps that.
What system are you using at the moment? I personally find that just sending everything to one gmail account with a label for a character works well for me.
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