How's My Driving?

[ponymeisters]

HOW'S MY DRIVING? Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD! Here's how it works: Post your name, along with what character(s) you play. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!) Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara! If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example: X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!" O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!" ????? PROFIT You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person! Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

Comments

[trustme]

The (Eleventh) Doctor
Fluttershy SN
Wally West / Kid Flash / Wondrous Bolt

Note: I might be wrapping things up and taking a break from playing Fluttershy SN and/or Wally. Meanwhile, I'm bringing a new character to the group.

[ponymechanic]

Your Wally and the doctor is still pretty good. Fluttershy's also pretty good, but I would like to see her around more if possible.

While that's a shame, sometimes we need breaks from our muses (like I had to with Coco).

[trustme]

Any ideas how to improve upon what I've already got?

[ponymechanic]

Hmm, I guess try to show Wally's other sides? I don't get to see his more teenage-ish side since he's still from Season 1.

[bluesuit_hoofy]

Mostly I'd like to see more of your Doctor. Also, I haven't been stalking your threads with absolute regularity, so you might have already addressed it, but I'd like to see more about how he feels about still being stuck here a year on. Eleven has the capacity to settle down in a way Ten would have struggled with, though I can see him being frustrated at being forced to settle down into one time and place. Is he frustrated with the situation, resigned to it, or out and out decided to just go with the flow and enjoy being a pony while it lasts?