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I'm not trying to defend Riki any here, but having played a Twilight of my own, let me say that it's a dangerous dance, keeping things balanced with a sparklebutt. She wants to learn, and in a panfandom game, she'll be given opportunities to learn. Throw in the whole Element of Magic thing and she can learn, which ends up with her ending up in a kinda overpowered Power Copier state without even meaning to be.
It's even more exaggerated when she's now got two panfandoms under her belt with Mayfield and MLJ; that said I think there's something to be said about willingly refraining from giving her power that she doesn't need to work for. As an example, the Kamen Rider/SMT4 stuff might be a smidge excessive, I feel, but at the same time, the things Lucifer taught her are less overwhelming because she's still expending effort and energy TO learn them.
It wasn't an attack. I certainly didn't take it that way, so don't worry about that. Both of you are right, though; the freebies are a bit much and I'll keep a tighter lid on them. Let Twi get things the Twilight way: enough study/exposure that she picks up on it herself.
That said, Chrysalis snapping will happen some time after the event; April's quiet enough that there won't be much interference
Well, the other thing about the Kamen Rider power she has is that it's just as much Princess Twilight's as Maylight's; that strongly interferes with its usability.
Yeah, I was discussing that with Riki actually and that's less blatant since it's... pretty blatantly situational at best and really might as well be an upgrade they need to spend active time studying anyway.
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Re: Riki
It's even more exaggerated when she's now got two panfandoms under her belt with Mayfield and MLJ; that said I think there's something to be said about willingly refraining from giving her power that she doesn't need to work for. As an example, the Kamen Rider/SMT4 stuff might be a smidge excessive, I feel, but at the same time, the things Lucifer taught her are less overwhelming because she's still expending effort and energy TO learn them.
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That said, Chrysalis snapping will happen some time after the event; April's quiet enough that there won't be much interferenceRe: Riki
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