How's My Driving?

[ponymeisters]

HOW'S MY DRIVING? Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD! Here's how it works: Post your name, along with what character(s) you play. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!) Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara! If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example: X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!" O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!" ????? PROFIT You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person! Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

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Ash Blaze

[ponycure_dream]

Nozomi Yumehara | Yes! Pretty Cure 5 (Mayfield AU)

Sonic | Sonic (games)

Derpy Hooves | MLP: FiM

Tsukasa Kadoya | Kamen Rider Decade

Yes, I do know I have a few problems with Nozomi and shunting her into the spotlight at the expense of the other, but please tell me if there are others.

Re: Ash Blaze

[ponymechanic]

Aside from what's already said, I think your Sonic and Derpy are still pretty good. I would like to see Caliburn react more since Sonic still has him with, but that's just me.

Otherwise, that's about all I can say really.