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Shaun | Gentarou Kisaragi, Ako Shirabe, Pinkie Pie EG, Flash Sentry EG and Lyra Heartstrings SN
Ako is already far removed from her original canon via Mayfield, and Pinkie is undergoing a life-changing moment. As it stands I wouldn't mind feedback on how derpy I'm getting.
Can I just say how much I've adored the Gentarou/Hain CR? It's so RARE to see Fourze with negative CR and watching him get driven to near-rage is a thing of marvelous, marvelous beauty.
I also like what you do with Lyra, though I admit that maybe she's had a few too many antics with things in the Archives at this point, so it's probably best if she cuts back a bit. (Or possibly if it's explored that she's kind of gotten herself addicted, in kind of a "magical otherworldy artifacts are awesome, MUST HAVE MORE" way)
I haven't really interacted too much with the other three, so I can't properly offer in-depth thoughts.
It really is, and it's a rarely seen part of Gentarou. We see in episode 1 that he can be petty and spiteful, but we never get to explore it. Truly negative CR is WONDERFUL.
And yeah, Lyra will be cutting down soon, because she's going to shelve most of the gadgets and put them into storage. The rest we'll have to see.
And I'm probably going to handle Lyra's addiction the same way Fourze did.
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Ako is already far removed from her original canon via Mayfield, and Pinkie is undergoing a life-changing moment. As it stands I wouldn't mind feedback on how derpy I'm getting.
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I also like what you do with Lyra, though I admit that maybe she's had a few too many antics with things in the Archives at this point, so it's probably best if she cuts back a bit. (Or possibly if it's explored that she's kind of gotten herself addicted, in kind of a "magical otherworldy artifacts are awesome, MUST HAVE MORE" way)
I haven't really interacted too much with the other three, so I can't properly offer in-depth thoughts.
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And yeah, Lyra will be cutting down soon, because she's going to shelve most of the gadgets and put them into storage. The rest we'll have to see.
And I'm probably going to handle Lyra's addiction the same way Fourze did.
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