How's My Driving?

[ponymeisters]

HOW'S MY DRIVING? Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD! Here's how it works: Post your name, along with what character(s) you play. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!) Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara! If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example: X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!" O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!" ????? PROFIT You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person! Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

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Goldude

[bustadecapinyoass]

Fluttershy/Fluttercruel | Pony POV | shy_kindness/cruel_kindness
Trixie Lulamoon | My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic | cape_and_wizard_hat

...You know what, I'll include this guy just in case
Hiro Nakamura | Heroes | ponythatcanstoptime

And even though she hasn't been accepted yet...
Mami Tomoe | Puella Magi Madoka Magica | bustadecapinyoass

[noxequus]

I will admit, Hiro never quite gelled with me, but in time I realized that was an issue on my end, not yours - he's just not my type of character. At the same time, I did like the interaction I had with him, and he really came into his own on that Griffon plot... for better or worse. He kinda shot himself in the hoof, but that's kind of a flaw in settings that are more idealistic than Heroes is.

Trixie is basically an extension of yourself, as I have said many times, and I still enjoy the presence of the Flutters, though sometimes your sentence structure kinda goes loose and it's harder to focus on your tags. Again, I think it's more me being a stickler for grammar than anything you're doing wrong. Regardless, pointing out my two cents in case it's something you yourself have been thinking about.

NON-HELPFUL DIAMOND TIARA MODE: Cut that Kyubey stuff on Plurk out, it's kinda annoying. :V

[bustadecapinyoass]

I will admit that I kind of vivisect sentence structure more often while doing Trixie tags, but that's just her odd way of speaking. It shouldn't happen as often on any other character, though, and I'll try to be better with that. Also typing skills.

As for Hiro, yes, it's kind of a shame things didn't go his way. Me dropping him isn't in response to things going wrong for him, it's just the fact that I just want to bring in a character and don't want to overextend myself. Still, he's actually fun to play, but his canon setting kinda sorta contradicts Equestria. I can't imagine how poorly things will go with Mami, though.

[noxequus]

Well, she should be fine provided she doesn't learn any Horrible, Traumatizing Truths.

Also she should stay away from things that are hungry.