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The My Little Jamjar Mods ([personal profile] ponymeisters) wrote in [community profile] mylittleooc2014-04-04 04:36 pm
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How's My Driving?




HOW'S MY DRIVING?



Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD!

Here's how it works:

  1. Post your name, along with what character(s) you play.
  2. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!)
  3. Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there.
  4. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing.
  5. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara!
    If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example:
    • X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!"
    • O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!"
  6. ?????
  7. PROFIT

You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person!

Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

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[personal profile] thepoweroflove 2014-04-05 12:54 am (UTC)(link)
Marty McFly | Back to the Future | [profile] 88milesperhour

IIII know I haven't been terribly active lately, hopefully I don't suck too much because of this.
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[personal profile] toosmarttodie 2014-04-05 12:59 am (UTC)(link)
Generally I'm glad that Marty has the kind of reactions you'd expect from an eighties kid that's seen way too much shit.

Keep it up!
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[personal profile] thepoweroflove 2014-04-06 04:30 am (UTC)(link)
... Do 80's kids who see too much shit have different reactions than kids from other decades?

But seriously though, thanks!
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[personal profile] noxequus 2014-04-05 01:34 am (UTC)(link)
Really, though, that's the only criticism I have. Your voice is good, and you're in a good place in the game, so if you pick up on your tagging out, let the dork do more than talk to the cat he lives with like some sort of crazy cat lady, then you'll really be in your stride.
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[personal profile] thepoweroflove 2014-04-06 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, I think I might be hitting that slump I tend to get after playing in a game for a couple of months (... that's a thing for me, really!). Buuut I'll try to hit up more tags and threads and junk! besides Marty would be devastated if he becomes a crazy cat lady/dude since cats are duumb.