How's My Driving?

[ponymeisters]

HOW'S MY DRIVING? Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD! Here's how it works: Post your name, along with what character(s) you play. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!) Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara! If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example: X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!" O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!" ????? PROFIT You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person! Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

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Sword

[noxequus]

Flare Star - OC - stormbroken
Vatan Haini - OC - pseudacteon_emigre
Princess Luna - MLP: FiM konran CRAU - noxequus

I've been struggling the past few weeks to focus; am I going too slow for anyone to tolerate? Feel free to tell me so. I'm fairly confident on voices, so if there's inconsistencies feel free to point those out, too.

Re: Sword

[ponymechanic]

No need to worry. I'm think you're doing just fine.

I do enjoy your Luna and the interactions between her and Tails. I haven't noticed any real inconsistencies myself.

Re: Sword

[tinkertytonk]

I have trouble getting a bead on Flare's accent. Is there a guide you use for it by chance or does it get thicker in certain instances? I'll think I've got it down, but then see something to contradict that. It makes hearing her unique voice a little harder when I'm reading tags sometimes.

[noxequus]

That's... a good question, actually, and something I need to be a little more mindful of. I know her words start getting more rough when she starts getting upset, but past that, I haven't really been using a guide. Add in the fact that she's been fueled a lot, lately, by my own frustration at life and sometimes I slip up.

Thank you for pointing that out, it's something I'll keep in mind!