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You're doing great with Patchy, which makes me happy in ways I can't even begin to explain. Likewise, Spark is always a compelling voice to hear and see roaming about, and I enjoy reading Minato's interactions with others - though I admit that, as a pretty blank straight-man, he's a little more difficult to approach.
I'll be sure to work on Minato a bit more, then- maybe some more lighthearted CR will get him to be more willing to do silly stuff. He's already dressed up as a Reaper to get two of his friends to stop fighting, so I can only assume it'll be downhill from here.
Well, it's more that he strikes me as the kind of deadpan-wit sort... not quite to the level that Yu has it, but his place is definitely off on the sidelines snarking people to death. And he does it beautifully.
I'll leave it up to you if you want more wacky hijinx, though - I wouldn't complain but it wasn't my intent to suggest it. ^^;
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mylittleooc2014-04-04 04:36 pm
Scott
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I can't really say anything about the other two.
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Either way, keep up the work good.
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I'll leave it up to you if you want more wacky hijinx, though - I wouldn't complain but it wasn't my intent to suggest it. ^^;
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