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I've been fighting with a lot of RL stress and more recently sickness, so please keep mindful that I'm working to fix my faltering tag drive as of late. Has my consistency in voice been okay?
Just don't confused our desire to tag with you more with disappointment that we don't get the option, okay? The one doesn't mean the other, so don't kick yourself over it.
If anyone should practice what they preach... you've been doing a lot better about that not being one of the things that gets you down lately, admittedly, but I'm still not sure if that's solely because other things in life (like your asshole roommate) are that much worse.
But yeah, that's more of what I was saying - I know my tags have been super slow the past two months or so, so that's something that doesn't need to be touched on.
Both their journals also have HMDs which is anon-enabled, IP logging off and screened posts. Anon on here is also fine.
I've been aware that I have (or had) been too evil with my characters and I have been trying to be much nicer to them, but I can't tell if I've been done enough or not. If I'm still making the same mistakes, please let me know.
Have I been having Tails lose his temper too much? Not act mature enough? Has he been boring?
Coco I've been really struggling lately. I have been having a hard time making AC with her a lot and I honestly have no idea where to take her in development. Aside from disappeared marefriend, she's happy with her life for the most part and most of her issues have been resolved. And waiting for her next appearance in MLP would require dropping her for a few months. Do you guys have any advice on what I could do with her and improve?
I've mentioned your enthusiasm - or overenthusiasm - a few times in anonplurks, and am finally feeling comfortable enough to come out and out myself. At this point, fully honestly? I have no problems with your IC presence.
The problem is, even though you're doing a lot better when it comes to the RP itself, sometimes in OOC matters - such as on Plurk, most notably - you tend to come on... really strong. I don't know if it's a lack of contextual empathy or something like that, but you seem to find things that bug you and latch onto them like a hungry pit bull, regardless of how insignificant they are or how awkward the tone gets. I'm not sure how to fix this, or if you can spot it while it's transpiring, but it's my biggest issue.
Regarding Tails losing his temper: it's hard to say what's "right", there. He's an impulsive teenager whose canon counterpart is an impulsive supergenius kid. In addition, he has some really frustrating negative CR in his life, so it makes sense that he'd lash out regularly. If anything, I'd love to see more of Tails and Trixie, if for no other reason than I can see Tails being the sort of type who would "try to be the better pony" and try to make amends, only to have it blow up in his face again and again thanks to Trixie's ego.
Regarding Coco: Finding contentment is a weird place in a game like this, but at the same time, you can still find stuff, if you look. As an example, Flare is working to try to help others find the fulfillment she has, while at the same time fighting with the fact that she knows she's not supposed to be here, that going back home would basically be accepting that the "natural order" of things is for her to be unhappy. It's an interesting dynamic to explore, so it's not like there's nothing at all you could do WITH Coco. After all, she's in a world where her (not)parents begrudgingly accept her choices, she has her dream job, and she's got more agency than she even had in canon. She's a self-made business-mare, but maybe that feels a little hollow since it's not "home".
I'm sorry about that. I know I've acted too strong at times, but I don't usually realize it. I have a hard time reading tone over the internet plus it doesn't help that I tend to be impatient a lot of the time. Honestly I don't know how I can fix that.
Ah good. I was afraid that it was coming off too strong as he's supposed to be level-headed.
Actually she never made amends with them but she's accepted that. She honestly doesn't want to go back to her world because she's happier here and would rather go with Kreutzer to her world or stay permanently. It feels more like home to her than her real one, which is part of why I'm not sure where to go with her.
About the only critical thing I can say is that a couple of times now our characters have been having a conversation that got dropped right as it was coming to a decision point -- Morgan shooting Chie that business proposal, or Butterfly needing a place to stay -- and then I find myself wondering how long is a courteous wait before I poke you OOC about those things. I know you were traveling during a lot of that, so I understand, it's just something I thought I should mention.
Yeah, I do apologize for that. It's a combination of being busy, travel, fatigue, trying to restart an RP drive, and getting embarrassed with how long things have gotten dragged out to go back to those things.
I'll try to be better on this. Thanks for your feedback!
My tagging speed has plummeted once again; that much I'm aware of. Despite RL issues piling up, I'm aiming to fix this constant issue. If there's anything besides speed that you're concerned about, please let me know.
Francis York Morgan (<user name="callmeyork").
I'm slowly getting back into the game, especially with this new event, so let me know how I could improve!
I've been inactive as of late and I know I still have various typos that happen. I'm gonna try and step it up and improve as much as I can. ANy other criticism or compliments will be appreciated.
On the typos front, have you made sure to read over your tags before you post them? The box should have red lines under the misspelled ones, and previewing with "Check Spelling" checked is always a good idea.
Other than that, I've no complaints. I'm not very familiar with TMNT, but Sunset Shimmer seems to be doing well for someone trying to reform, as far as I can tell.
Nephenee | That One Strategy Series With Permadeath | neighfeni Reimi Hanamori | Elemental Monsters: X/Y | rafflesia_neighponi
I'm trying to get better at catching up, and hopefully I've been doing a bit better. Reimi's still difficult for me, but I'm working to fix that. Also trying to make my writing a bit more interesting...
Right now, I'm actually feeling pretty good. The main thing I worry about is tagging consistency and speed, which has been lagging because of the holiday season and coming off that rush. If you have any other concerns I'm free to hear them.
I don't get to play off you as much as I'd like, but for what little I know of the characters, I think you're doing fine. I always enjoy watching Homura's shenanigans, too.
Altogether, I feel like I could stand to be a bit more consistent. I know I left a lot of people hanging with Giegue's second entry and I'll try to improve on that. The holidays have just been rough and I've been dealing with some unhappiness, but things are a lot better now.
I already know about my dead slow problem, which is why I just threw myself on hiatus. Whoops. Hopefully a small break will help me get up to speed. I'm also having a problem doing stuff with Arcee, it seems like the guys eat up most of my attention so I'm going to try and canon review while I'm at it. But yeah, burnout, plus holidays, plus new job really hit me hard and I'm really sorry guys.
I've been slow as hell lately, and I'm sorry about that. At least part of it has been Christmas retail season, which is why I was nigh invisible during December. I'd love to hear how I'm doing in general, whether comments related to slowness or anything else.
MLJ has been Yang's test drive as a muse for me basically and while I'm starting to feel fairly confident playing her, I would definitely like to hear thoughts on how I'm doing with her/RP in general. ^^
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Luna of the Night Market |
Bon Bon the Bon Bon the Bon |
I've been fighting with a lot of RL stress and more recently sickness, so please keep mindful that I'm working to fix my faltering tag drive as of late. Has my consistency in voice been okay?
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But yeah, that's more of what I was saying - I know my tags have been super slow the past two months or so, so that's something that doesn't need to be touched on.
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Yayoi Kise
Woona
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Patchouli Knowledge |
Captain Celestia |
Lie Ren |
I've been falling off of tagging a lot the past few weeks because of stress, but I think things might be better now. Maybe.
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Both their journals also have HMDs which is anon-enabled, IP logging off and screened posts. Anon on here is also fine.
I've been aware that I have (or had) been too evil with my characters and I have been trying to be much nicer to them, but I can't tell if I've been done enough or not. If I'm still making the same mistakes, please let me know.
Have I been having Tails lose his temper too much? Not act mature enough? Has he been boring?
Coco I've been really struggling lately. I have been having a hard time making AC with her a lot and I honestly have no idea where to take her in development. Aside from disappeared marefriend, she's happy with her life for the most part and most of her issues have been resolved. And waiting for her next appearance in MLP would require dropping her for a few months. Do you guys have any advice on what I could do with her and improve?
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The problem is, even though you're doing a lot better when it comes to the RP itself, sometimes in OOC matters - such as on Plurk, most notably - you tend to come on... really strong. I don't know if it's a lack of contextual empathy or something like that, but you seem to find things that bug you and latch onto them like a hungry pit bull, regardless of how insignificant they are or how awkward the tone gets. I'm not sure how to fix this, or if you can spot it while it's transpiring, but it's my biggest issue.
Regarding Tails losing his temper: it's hard to say what's "right", there. He's an impulsive teenager whose canon counterpart is an impulsive supergenius kid. In addition, he has some really frustrating negative CR in his life, so it makes sense that he'd lash out regularly. If anything, I'd love to see more of Tails and Trixie, if for no other reason than I can see Tails being the sort of type who would "try to be the better pony" and try to make amends, only to have it blow up in his face again and again thanks to Trixie's ego.
Regarding Coco: Finding contentment is a weird place in a game like this, but at the same time, you can still find stuff, if you look. As an example, Flare is working to try to help others find the fulfillment she has, while at the same time fighting with the fact that she knows she's not supposed to be here, that going back home would basically be accepting that the "natural order" of things is for her to be unhappy. It's an interesting dynamic to explore, so it's not like there's nothing at all you could do WITH Coco. After all, she's in a world where her (not)parents begrudgingly accept her choices, she has her dream job, and she's got more agency than she even had in canon. She's a self-made business-mare, but maybe that feels a little hollow since it's not "home".
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Ah good. I was afraid that it was coming off too strong as he's supposed to be level-headed.
Actually she never made amends with them but she's accepted that. She honestly doesn't want to go back to her world because she's happier here and would rather go with Kreutzer to her world or stay permanently. It feels more like home to her than her real one, which is part of why I'm not sure where to go with her.
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Yg'baladoth ✦
Butterfly ✦
I've been wanting to tag with Chie more. ;w;
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I'll try to be better on this. Thanks for your feedback!
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Dante |
Princess Cadence |
Madoka Kaname |
My tagging speed has plummeted once again; that much I'm aware of. Despite RL issues piling up, I'm aiming to fix this constant issue. If there's anything besides speed that you're concerned about, please let me know.
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Sunset SHimmer | MLP: Equestria Girls |
I've been inactive as of late and I know I still have various typos that happen. I'm gonna try and step it up and improve as much as I can. ANy other criticism or compliments will be appreciated.
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Other than that, I've no complaints. I'm not very familiar with TMNT, but Sunset Shimmer seems to be doing well for someone trying to reform, as far as I can tell.
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Reimi Hanamori | Elemental Monsters: X/Y |
I'm trying to get better at catching up, and hopefully I've been doing a bit better. Reimi's still difficult for me, but I'm working to fix that. Also trying to make my writing a bit more interesting...
Anything I need to work on?
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Derpy Hooves | (
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Sasami Masaki Jurai | (
Lyrical Twilight is exempt ATM
I know I've been slow because of work, and I am still working on fixing things with using others beyond Nozomi. Anything else, ping me!
Goldude
Littlepip | Fallout: Equestria |
Trixie Lulamoon | My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |
I've been wondering if I'm doing Littlepip right or not, so any criticisms arer welcome.
Lu
Harvey Finevoice |
Pollo |
Discord |
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Blake Belladonna | RWBY |
Chiyo Mihama/Chiyo-chan (CRAU from Mayfield) | Azumanga Daioh |
General feedback OOC and IC would be great, particularly on how I've been playing Blake since I'm struggling with her some. Any and all crit is fine.
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That said, your Tails feels like a grown up Tails and is still recognizable despite the changes. I believe you're doing fine with him IC-wise.
I don't know the canons of the other two very well to really comment.
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Jappleack/ Applejack (AU) | PONY.MOV/Ask Jappleack |
Pokey Minch | Earthbound/Mother 2 - Mayfield CRAU |
Right now, I'm actually feeling pretty good. The main thing I worry about is tagging consistency and speed, which has been lagging because of the holiday season and coming off that rush. If you have any other concerns I'm free to hear them.
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Minako Aino (CRAU) | Sailor Moon |
Homura Akemi (AU) | Puella Magi Madoka Magica |
Feedback is appreciated! I am always worried about my style, my tagging speed, possible OoC and IC problems with my or my characters, and so on. D:
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Excel | Excel Saga |
Altogether, I feel like I could stand to be a bit more consistent. I know I left a lot of people hanging with Giegue's second entry and I'll try to improve on that. The holidays have just been rough and I've been dealing with some unhappiness, but things are a lot better now.
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Cameron |
I know I've been el zilcho most of the past month and recent weeks, but I'd love to hear how I'm doing.
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Teddie |
Dandy |
I already know about my dead slow problem, which is why I just threw myself on hiatus. Whoops. Hopefully a small break will help me get up to speed. I'm also having a problem doing stuff with Arcee, it seems like the guys eat up most of my attention so I'm going to try and canon review while I'm at it. But yeah, burnout, plus holidays, plus new job really hit me hard and I'm really sorry guys.
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Daniel Kanegem | OC |
I've been slow as hell lately, and I'm sorry about that. At least part of it has been Christmas retail season, which is why I was nigh invisible during December. I'd love to hear how I'm doing in general, whether comments related to slowness or anything else.
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Pyrrha Nikos | RWBY |
Violet Parr | The Incredibles |
Nanako Dojima | Persona 4 |
Despite not being active with certain characters, how am I doing? Anon or not, let me know!
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MLJ has been Yang's test drive as a muse for me basically and while I'm starting to feel fairly confident playing her, I would definitely like to hear thoughts on how I'm doing with her/RP in general. ^^
Ammy
I know I need to tag out more and be less shy about making new CR, but I'm open to suggestion.