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I'm sorry about that. I know I've acted too strong at times, but I don't usually realize it. I have a hard time reading tone over the internet plus it doesn't help that I tend to be impatient a lot of the time. Honestly I don't know how I can fix that.
Ah good. I was afraid that it was coming off too strong as he's supposed to be level-headed.
Actually she never made amends with them but she's accepted that. She honestly doesn't want to go back to her world because she's happier here and would rather go with Kreutzer to her world or stay permanently. It feels more like home to her than her real one, which is part of why I'm not sure where to go with her.
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Ah good. I was afraid that it was coming off too strong as he's supposed to be level-headed.
Actually she never made amends with them but she's accepted that. She honestly doesn't want to go back to her world because she's happier here and would rather go with Kreutzer to her world or stay permanently. It feels more like home to her than her real one, which is part of why I'm not sure where to go with her.