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But yeah, Luna, Dash, and Pinkie are in the exotic "CRAU without existential crises" boat, aren't they?
Zetta's is a delicate balance, and during pony peacetime, he probably WILL suffer just a little bit and get antsy; he fits that Laharl/Mao mold of "tries really hard to act like he's evil while he's petting all these puppies" which means that less genre-savvy characters will just roll their eyes at any statements that he's a demonic overlord.
I do think being more proactive with him is when he shines the best, though, ranging from the Trueberry plot to bullying Flare into getting self-esteem (how did THAT work, exactly? Dunno, but it did) to the utter badassitude that nobody but SN!Luna will actually see or acknowledge.
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But yeah, Luna, Dash, and Pinkie are in the exotic "CRAU without existential crises" boat, aren't they?
Zetta's is a delicate balance, and during pony peacetime, he probably WILL suffer just a little bit and get antsy; he fits that Laharl/Mao mold of "tries really hard to act like he's evil while he's petting all these puppies" which means that less genre-savvy characters will just roll their eyes at any statements that he's a demonic overlord.
I do think being more proactive with him is when he shines the best, though, ranging from the Trueberry plot to bullying Flare into getting self-esteem (how did THAT work, exactly? Dunno, but it did) to the utter badassitude that nobody but SN!Luna will actually see or acknowledge.
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I'll keep the proactive thing in mind. It's hard not for those sorts of things to become a giant joke, which I know is one of my weaknesses...