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Flare Star Vatan Haini/Hain Princess Luna (Kon Ran CRAU)
I know most of my cast is OCs and one is a game-AU, so it's harder to get actual constructive criticism. On the other hand, the two questions I have are ones that are unrelated to how close I am to any canon:
Have I been consistent in my character voice, and how am I OOCly?
The second one is particularly of interest to me, because I'm forever afraid of people not telling me I'm being a jerk to my face, and for that matter, I'm worried I've been too pushy lately when it comes to description, possibly even bordering on godmodey. Have I?
If you don't want to talk to me about it here, I'm always available on Plurk at kataranisword, and typically on AIM as Bahamut725.
I think they've been consistent lately, and as far as Luna is concerned she IS a game import which means she has undergone a lot of previous development. Things are bound to be dictated by her previous experiences. So I think you're good.
Sword
Vatan Haini/Hain
Princess Luna (Kon Ran CRAU)
I know most of my cast is OCs and one is a game-AU, so it's harder to get actual constructive criticism. On the other hand, the two questions I have are ones that are unrelated to how close I am to any canon:
Have I been consistent in my character voice, and how am I OOCly?
The second one is particularly of interest to me, because I'm forever afraid of people not telling me I'm being a jerk to my face, and for that matter, I'm worried I've been too pushy lately when it comes to description, possibly even bordering on godmodey. Have I?
If you don't want to talk to me about it here, I'm always available on Plurk at
Re: Sword