HOW'S MY DRIVING

[ponymeisters]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?: CHRISTMAS EDITION Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD! Here's how it works: Post your name, along with what character(s) you play. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!) Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara! If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example: X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!" O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!" ????? PROFIT You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person! Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

Comments

Maddin/Cirape

[twotonehoofbeast]

I am totally at work right now, but, pls, any and all concrit. I can always do better :3

[cruel_kindness]

It's somewhat odd to see asterisks being used to denote thoughts and actions instead of brackets. I mean, it's bearable, but still very odd.

[twotonehoofbeast]

Sorry? I've always done it this way, so I can't promise I'll remember if I try to switch over to brackets or whatever.

[strawberryredgrave]

I personally wouldn't worry so much about that. It's a personal preference thing, like how some people also use parentheses or brackets. As long as it keeps the prose separate from the dialogue, it's all good.

That said, I'm really not too familiar with Homestuck, so I can't give critique on character voice, but I feel you're comfortable enough with the character that it's nothing to worry about. That's a really important part about RPing.

I think you're doing pretty well, from what I've seen. I'd just like to thread with Sollux more so I can get a better idea of him.