HOW'S MY DRIVING

[ponymeisters]

HOW'S MY DRIVING?: CHRISTMAS EDITION Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD! Here's how it works: Post your name, along with what character(s) you play. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!) Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara! If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example: X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!" O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!" ????? PROFIT You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person! Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

Comments

Goldude

[cape_and_wizard_hat]

Trixie Lulamoon
Fluttershy/Fluttercruel
Hiro Nakamura

I've seen in one HMD that Hiro doesn't exactly pop as much as my other muses, so please tell me how I can fix that.

[callmeyork]

The only only only thing that bugs me are little tiny grammar/spelling things I catch from time to time, but other than that, I think your muses are just fine. Especially the Flutters.

Can't say much about Hiro because I don't know his canon all that much, but he doesn't seem too flat.

[cape_and_wizard_hat]

Well, I cannot have the typing skills to save my life, but I'll try to improve. You should see how horrendous I am in IRC where I CAN'T go back and edit posts.

Re: Goldude

[tsunpony]

A bit more nerding out would help for Hiro. He is a superhero and comic book geek, right? He's also Japanese and we have plenty of Super Sentai and Kamen Riders and Precure, all major fixtures of Japanese media culture. He'd have to be living under a rock to at least not know of Sentai and Rider. I would say give the nerd-stick a bit of a increase and have him geek out a little harder.

[cape_and_wizard_hat]

I need to watch more Kamen Rider and Precure so I know exactly how to make him geek out. I'd also say he knows way more nerd stuff than I do and maybe even played more video games than I do, but I'll try my best to get him to nerdgasm more.

[tsunpony]

If you need help with Hiro's nerding, just ask. I'm up to date with the franchises currently in-play in the series, and I can give you reference to what shows would be available around the time when Heroes aired.

[cape_and_wizard_hat]

That would be great, thanks!

[tsunpony]

No problem!

[swordsage]

You just picked up Hiro, and he seems like he's supposed to be a little more polite/uptight/correct than say, Trixie or the Flutters are. I think that just reflects the culture he grew up in, which makes me want to say you're playing him correctly (from what little I know of Hiro).

Now, three months down the road, if he's still the same, then that might be a problem, since he's not growing with his time in Ponyville/Equestria, but until then...

(besides, there are things that DO excite him, so...idk?)