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I haven't actually interacted with York yet, but I do like stalking your posts. You're pretty clear and concise and it's really easy to tell when York is talking to Zach, et cetera.
I'm sorry I'm not more helpful, but I have the fault of being canon blind to...a heck of a lot of things. orz
That's fine, Deadly Premonition is still semi-obscure. Usually when people fault themselves for canon blindness, I prescribe a certain Let's Play for them to browse through.
Edited (Now if I could just get the URL right. PART TWO.) 2013-12-20 17:27 (UTC)
Given this is one of the few canons here I'm not totally blind to, I have to say you hit York extremely well. I'm actually going back and watching SGF's LP of this just because you reminded me of how much I love the game, and your attention to detail with him shows. Also seconding that your posts are clear and easy to distinguish between him and Zach.
Now if we can get the poor guy more cigs he'll be all set.
I recently got the Director's Cut for Steam that has EVEN MORE exclusive content... I'm thinking of streaming it or something just to canon review and play through it all again, plus to see what the hell SWERY could have added.
Also, no, they're not. They either have to be POLICE brand or HEAVY brand cigarettes. He will accept nothing less.
:( The only thing she can hand him that's heavy is the Wishblade or her armor. So he's outta luck, oops. If we were allowed to plant tobacco, she would for him man.
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Okay seriously I am the most insecure about my RPing so HMD/concrit would be fantastic. I'm perfectly okay with Anons.
This is only for York because haha what are other characters???
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I'm sorry I'm not more helpful, but I have the fault of being canon blind to...a heck of a lot of things. orz
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Sir Kasu
Now if we can get the poor guy more cigs he'll be all set.
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Yes. More smokes, please. Those are important.
they help him pass the time, you seeno subject
Dang it Kasu you owe me a new monitor. It now has tea on it.
Pipes are tots the same thing right?
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Also, no, they're not. They either have to be POLICE brand or HEAVY brand cigarettes. He will accept nothing less.
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:( The only thing she can hand him that's heavy is the Wishblade or her armor. So he's outta luck, oops. If we were allowed to plant tobacco, she would for him man.
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well at least you won't have to worry about graphics too muchAww. Maybe he can ask one of the Princesses for a regain of a pack?
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True, this thing handles PS2 graphics like a champ..Possibly! If Neph ever found out what cigs do though, she would fret forever.
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Here you go.
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