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The My Little Jamjar Mods ([personal profile] ponymeisters) wrote in [community profile] mylittleooc2013-12-20 11:46 am
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HOW'S MY DRIVING


HOW'S MY DRIVING?: CHRISTMAS EDITION



Hello, Equestrians! Its time for a game-wide HMD!

Here's how it works:

  1. Post your name, along with what character(s) you play.
  2. If you want, specify particular areas you would like feedback on! (It's okay to ask for just general feedback!)
  3. Indicate whether or not you're okay with anonymous feedback. (It's totally cool if you don't.) You can also post links to your character's personal HMD if you'd prefer comments there.
  4. Reply to other people telling them how you think they are doing.
  5. Be polite and objective! If someone says they're cool with anonymous crit, that is not an invitation to be unfriendly. No one likes a Diamond Tiara!
    If you have something negative to say about somebody else's playing, make your points politely and suggest ways to improve. To give an example:
    • X - Unhelpful Diamond Tiara - "Jeez, Terri, can you learn to type? You've got about a billion typos in your posts!"
    • O - Helpful Not Diamond Tiara - "Hi, Terri, I noticed you have a number of typos in your posts. Something you might want to do is give your posts that one last look-over before hitting submit. It would really help with readability!"
  6. ?????
  7. PROFIT

You don't have to post your own characters to give other people feedback! You don't have to post your characters at all if you don't want to. It is 100% OPTIONAL. If you do post, we would encourage you to give feedback to at least one other person!

Flattery is welcome just as much as concrit!

callmeyork: (*p: What?!)

Kasu

[personal profile] callmeyork 2013-12-20 04:52 pm (UTC)(link)
/CRASHES INTO THIS POST WITH THE FORCE OF A THOUSAND BULLETS

Okay seriously I am the most insecure about my RPing so HMD/concrit would be fantastic. I'm perfectly okay with Anons.

This is only for York because haha what are other characters???
Edited 2013-12-20 17:08 (UTC)
swordsage: (Default)

[personal profile] swordsage 2013-12-20 05:17 pm (UTC)(link)
I haven't actually interacted with York yet, but I do like stalking your posts. You're pretty clear and concise and it's really easy to tell when York is talking to Zach, et cetera.

I'm sorry I'm not more helpful, but I have the fault of being canon blind to...a heck of a lot of things. orz
callmeyork: (*smile*)

[personal profile] callmeyork 2013-12-20 05:18 pm (UTC)(link)
That's fine, Deadly Premonition is still semi-obscure. Usually when people fault themselves for canon blindness, I prescribe a certain Let's Play for them to browse through.
Edited (Now if I could just get the URL right. PART TWO.) 2013-12-20 17:27 (UTC)
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Sir Kasu

[personal profile] neighfeni 2013-12-20 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Given this is one of the few canons here I'm not totally blind to, I have to say you hit York extremely well. I'm actually going back and watching SGF's LP of this just because you reminded me of how much I love the game, and your attention to detail with him shows. Also seconding that your posts are clear and easy to distinguish between him and Zach.

Now if we can get the poor guy more cigs he'll be all set.
callmeyork: (Smokin'!)

[personal profile] callmeyork 2013-12-20 07:24 pm (UTC)(link)
adsfjhasjdfh you have no idea how happy that makes me feel, getting people to revisit the canon and say "yep, you're doing fine" is fantastic

Yes. More smokes, please. Those are important. they help him pass the time, you see
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[personal profile] neighfeni 2013-12-20 07:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Man, Deadly Premonition is nuts. You and SGF remind me of this.

Dang it Kasu you owe me a new monitor. It now has tea on it.
Pipes are tots the same thing right?
callmeyork: (Default)

[personal profile] callmeyork 2013-12-20 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I recently got the Director's Cut for Steam that has EVEN MORE exclusive content... I'm thinking of streaming it or something just to canon review and play through it all again, plus to see what the hell SWERY could have added.

Also, no, they're not. They either have to be POLICE brand or HEAVY brand cigarettes. He will accept nothing less.
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[personal profile] neighfeni 2013-12-20 07:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Hrgh...I wonder if my comp can run it..

:( The only thing she can hand him that's heavy is the Wishblade or her armor. So he's outta luck, oops. If we were allowed to plant tobacco, she would for him man.
callmeyork: (Default)

[personal profile] callmeyork 2013-12-20 07:43 pm (UTC)(link)

well at least you won't have to worry about graphics too much

Aww. Maybe he can ask one of the Princesses for a regain of a pack?

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[personal profile] neighfeni 2013-12-20 07:57 pm (UTC)(link)
True, this thing handles PS2 graphics like a champ..

Possibly! If Neph ever found out what cigs do though, she would fret forever.
soulofblue: (Thoughtful)

[personal profile] soulofblue 2013-12-21 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
Okay so this...isn't really crit, I guess, but is there an LP of this game you would recommend? I'd like to watch it.
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[personal profile] soulofblue 2013-12-21 01:28 am (UTC)(link)
Sweet