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I'm fine with the Madoka subplot. Plenty of us have specific plans in mind for characters and their interactions with specific others. I only wish that more outside of the subplot was going on with Madoka. I also think it might help if other characters had a chance to really influence the subplot.
Those are good points. Thus far, I've had her focusing on schoolwork and being a normal kid, though it's admittedly been in the background. Maybe if more of it is brought up to the foreground, it could balance out the subplot things.
As for the second point, I'll have to think about that. I'm totally for it, don't get me wrong; it's really a matter of figuring out where exactly to go with the subplot, which will require plotting things with Ni (Homura-mun). It's definitely feasible, though, especially with more characters becoming aware of it and taking stances or roles in it (such as Giegue and Discord). Ideally anyone can get involved if they want.
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mylittleooc2015-04-13 08:29 am
Re: Riki
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As for the second point, I'll have to think about that. I'm totally for it, don't get me wrong; it's really a matter of figuring out where exactly to go with the subplot, which will require plotting things with Ni (Homura-mun). It's definitely feasible, though, especially with more characters becoming aware of it and taking stances or roles in it (such as Giegue and Discord). Ideally anyone can get involved if they want.
I'll definitely get to work on that.