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I really don't know where I can start with this, so I'll start with telling you that, from what I remember of FO:E, you've got that blend of awkwardness and WASTELAND JUSTICE almost down pat in Littlepip, though I think you've about reached as far as you can go when it comes to making her second-guess herself on her actions against Tirek. She's gonna worry about consequences, sure, but not enough so that it'll stop her from doing what needs to be done.
As for why I actually wanted to reply to this, though, well. Your IC voice is great. You play characters well, and manage to keep the Flutters active and not overwhelming like some CRAU gets.
I just have a real problem with your OOC demeanor, to the point where yes, I unfriended you on Plurk a month or two ago. When you get excited about things, or even just work yourself into a niche on a joke, you seem to shut out the rest of the world and just push forward, full-bore, no matter how uncomfortable everyone else in the room (or plurk, as the case may be) is. I'm not entirely sure to what degree you can fix this, but I'm pretty sure that acknowledging people when they say "stop" is... a good start. If you can actually pick up when people are uncomfortable, back off then, too, but I know that not everyone is as quick to pick up on unspoken cues like that.
What, really? I had no idea I was playing Littlepip so well. First off, yes, I agree I've taken her as far as I could go. She's not really a ball of whiny despair who does nothing and even in her most despair-like moment, she tried to do SOMETHING. It's something I'll continue to be wary about just in case I push it too far, though. I'm going to keep her worries about changing Equestria to a minimum until it seems like it's appropriate. IE there's ACTUAL EVIDENCE that what she did changed Equestria. For now, it mostly seems like it's only her worries and fears, and thus, she's gonna focus on other things.
And thank you so much for saying this. It's definitely a problem I'm aware of and will at least try to work on getting better. I apologize for making you unfriend me on plurk and I'll try not to have it happen again.
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As for why I actually wanted to reply to this, though, well. Your IC voice is great. You play characters well, and manage to keep the Flutters active and not overwhelming like some CRAU gets.
I just have a real problem with your OOC demeanor, to the point where yes, I unfriended you on Plurk a month or two ago. When you get excited about things, or even just work yourself into a niche on a joke, you seem to shut out the rest of the world and just push forward, full-bore, no matter how uncomfortable everyone else in the room (or plurk, as the case may be) is. I'm not entirely sure to what degree you can fix this, but I'm pretty sure that acknowledging people when they say "stop" is... a good start. If you can actually pick up when people are uncomfortable, back off then, too, but I know that not everyone is as quick to pick up on unspoken cues like that.
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And thank you so much for saying this. It's definitely a problem I'm aware of and will at least try to work on getting better. I apologize for making you unfriend me on plurk and I'll try not to have it happen again.
That's a promise. I'll try and get better.
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