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Once again I'm not sure how to approach this, since going on hiatus with Fluttershy was a natural thing to do in your situation, but it seemed to me like once someone mentioned how awful it would be for something to happen to her in order to justify her disappearance, you went running to that conclusion, cackling in mad scientist glee at the idea of bringing that much unrest to the game.
Was that my imagination, or did you embrace the idea of causing emotional harm to your muse and a whole slew of others that readily? Because if you did you... miiiight want to dial that back a bit. I know we all make jokes about being horrible to our muses, and as far as I know there was no lasting harm, but, well.
It almost felt like "all these players like me around so much, so I'm gonna enjoy torturing them when I'm gone!" which I know is 100% not your actual intent.
Well...I was actually the one who came up with the idea of her getting caught by Calice when I went on hiatus. I had gone on hiatus during the dive, and since it was mentioned that those in the dive could be caught by Calice, I just went with it.
But I'll be honest, I had no idea that it was going to turn out like it did. I was genuinely surprised by how everything played out, because while I knew there would have been some issue within game, I really hadn't meant for all of that to happen, or for it to get as out of hand as it did.
But yeah, I know what you mean. I'll definitely try to tone it down a touch.
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mylittleooc2015-04-13 08:29 am
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Anon or not, either is fine with me. I'm not sure if I'm looking for any specific kind of feedback, so I guess anything you'd like to tell me!
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Was that my imagination, or did you embrace the idea of causing emotional harm to your muse and a whole slew of others that readily? Because if you did you... miiiight want to dial that back a bit. I know we all make jokes about being horrible to our muses, and as far as I know there was no lasting harm, but, well.
It almost felt like "all these players like me around so much, so I'm gonna enjoy torturing them when I'm gone!" which I know is 100% not your actual intent.
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But I'll be honest, I had no idea that it was going to turn out like it did. I was genuinely surprised by how everything played out, because while I knew there would have been some issue within game, I really hadn't meant for all of that to happen, or for it to get as out of hand as it did.
But yeah, I know what you mean. I'll definitely try to tone it down a touch.