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Much like Sword said, I do like that you guys are trying to balance the heavy modplot stuff with slice-of-life, though keep in mind if you try to make it too dark all the time, that runs the risk of either turning people off or break characters to the point where they can't play them. After all, despite the RP ad saying that we have a dark modplot, this isn't a horror game.
In terms of NPCs, while Tirek was interesting, his whole "might is right" thing confused me. He wasn't like that in Twilight's Kingdom or in G1. Otherwise he was IC.
We are actually doing our best to tone down the darkness! Part of the reason we asked people not to have their characters killed in this most recent plot is because of that. We wanted Tirek to be a serious threat, but in the show, he is not a murderer. We felt that would be OOC for him and undermine efforts we'd made to lighten this particular plot from its original inception.
We will bear in mind your thoughts on Tirek for any future use he might get. We were trying to extrapolate from his general power lust shown in the show, though!
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In terms of NPCs, while Tirek was interesting, his whole "might is right" thing confused me. He wasn't like that in Twilight's Kingdom or in G1. Otherwise he was IC.
Overall you guys are still awesome as mods.
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We will bear in mind your thoughts on Tirek for any future use he might get. We were trying to extrapolate from his general power lust shown in the show, though!