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You're doing a lot better in regards to how you come off OOCly, and I think you've toned back the 'torturing' the muse bit. For that, I think you deserve a lot of credit.
Just remember you need to watch your wording, though. Like using inflammatory language in the HMD of a muse - 4G!Dash in this case. There didn't seem to be much call for tossing the term 'bitch' in there, when other terms can work and aren't nearly as offputting to people.
I know it's hard, but you've been getting better, and I know you're capable of getting even more so. Despite the above, I genuinely believe that, and enjoy playing off you, even if I'm not the speediest of taggers. I want to see you do well, and not push others away, and that's why I bring the above up, my dear.
I'm glad to hear that. I have feared that I was never gonna get better at that because I didn't know how to fix it, but looks like I'm in the right direction at least.
Ah sorry about that. I jumped the gun there. Though I had tried to not make it as harsh, but clearly I failed there.
You were doing better, and you slipped a bit. But you know what you did wrong now, so you apologize and keep going forward. That's how we fix things.
Weighing words and thinking of how you'd want to be told something is generally a good place to begin when fixing that sort of thing, I figure. Remember, we're all people that have feelings. I find it's easier to start softly, erring on caution, before you get harder about things.
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mylittleooc2015-04-13 08:29 am
Nikil
Coco Pommel (AU) | My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic |
Anything I should improve on? Anon's okay.
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Just remember you need to watch your wording, though. Like using inflammatory language in the HMD of a muse - 4G!Dash in this case. There didn't seem to be much call for tossing the term 'bitch' in there, when other terms can work and aren't nearly as offputting to people.
I know it's hard, but you've been getting better, and I know you're capable of getting even more so. Despite the above, I genuinely believe that, and enjoy playing off you, even if I'm not the speediest of taggers. I want to see you do well, and not push others away, and that's why I bring the above up, my dear.
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Ah sorry about that. I jumped the gun there. Though I had tried to not make it as harsh, but clearly I failed there.
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Weighing words and thinking of how you'd want to be told something is generally a good place to begin when fixing that sort of thing, I figure. Remember, we're all people that have feelings. I find it's easier to start softly, erring on caution, before you get harder about things.
Keep on keeping on, Nikil. You'll get there!