You're doing a lot better in regards to how you come off OOCly, and I think you've toned back the 'torturing' the muse bit. For that, I think you deserve a lot of credit.

Just remember you need to watch your wording, though. Like using inflammatory language in the HMD of a muse - 4G!Dash in this case. There didn't seem to be much call for tossing the term 'bitch' in there, when other terms can work and aren't nearly as offputting to people.

I know it's hard, but you've been getting better, and I know you're capable of getting even more so. Despite the above, I genuinely believe that, and enjoy playing off you, even if I'm not the speediest of taggers. I want to see you do well, and not push others away, and that's why I bring the above up, my dear.