Seconding what Dragon said - you've got a good grasp of where you need to patch things up, and with Derpy I'd almost suggest sitting down and really ironing out her day-to-day routine, maybe even making a log about it somewhere along the line. After all, she's a Setting Native, she's been settled in longer than most of the cast has even been here, and she doesn't seem the type to let something like a bunch of new arrivals stir her up too much.
Also, one thing I do want to applaud you for is doing a good job making Q think and sound differently from Discord. I know, given John DeLancie's charisma, that it's a very easy trap to make Q into a "Space Discord", but you've avoided that almost entirely, and I love it.
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Also, one thing I do want to applaud you for is doing a good job making Q think and sound differently from Discord. I know, given John DeLancie's charisma, that it's a very easy trap to make Q into a "Space Discord", but you've avoided that almost entirely, and I love it.