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Well... Skyfire still wants to build the shelter/bunker... If for no other reason than it's good to have 'just in case'... Since Billy has already agreed to help... maybe he can find a way to get Skyfire to actually announce the project? XD Make a real community thing out of it? The empty log is still sitting there... XP
Questing could work... If Skyfire can be talked into it at least.
Somehow though I have a feeling that we'll end up with the two of them getting caught up in something and needing someone else to drag them both away from it by their ears...XDD
Billy has experience working in groups! Maybe he could do something to make it fun? Someone like Pinkie would probably insist on any proper bunker being equipped with games, anyway.
And yeah. They do tend to forget to take care of themselves, silly boys.
Skyfire could use the help. He's not really worked in groups at all, with a work partner at best.
I think the plans are just for things like the necessities (food,shelter,water,housing,etc) and a lot of open rooms for other things to be decided as needed. Lots of room to include a game/rec room. XD He did plan the thing with the assumption that there would be a lot of space needed I think.
They are silly. I kind of want to see how someone would drag them away from their work...
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mylittleooc2014-09-24 04:26 pm
Re: Chris
The empty log is still sitting there... XPQuesting could work... If Skyfire can be talked into it at least.
Somehow though I have a feeling that we'll end up with the two of them getting caught up in something and needing someone else to drag them both away from it by their ears...XDD
Re: Chris
And yeah. They do tend to forget to take care of themselves, silly boys.
Re: Chris
I think the plans are just for things like the necessities (food,shelter,water,housing,etc) and a lot of open rooms for other things to be decided as needed. Lots of room to include a game/rec room. XD He did plan the thing with the assumption that there would be a lot of space needed I think.
They are silly. I kind of want to see how someone would drag them away from their work...