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She knows about it and doesn't like it, but as a princess herself, she understands the necessity. Plus she's a far better healer than a fighter; she'd do more good staying behind.
Kreu's where I'm admittedly shaky. She's kind of been...there...for several months now. I still need to think things over before I make up my mind.
That's okay. If you think it'll help, try to see about canon updating her if you can. Yes that would mean she would be alive again, but it's just a suggestion. At the very least, canon reviewing could help with voice too.
It's not so much the voice as it is the muse herself getting distant, like Chrysalis did a few months back. It's not to that degree, but the strongest consistency is her stagnation.
Being one of the few people that knows Kreu's canons - both the original and the CRAU? I question the viability of a canon update. Unlike the Flutters, when Kreutzer came into WW she was good and dead in her canon, and said canon very much does not do that whole "come back to life" thing.
We're talking FMA levels of "do not try to bring the dead back" here. Plus, as far as I know, once Zecora took over as Composer in WW's (implied) epilogue, Kreu stayed behind as a Reaper. So, yeah.
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Kreu's where I'm admittedly shaky. She's kind of been...there...for several months now. I still need to think things over before I make up my mind.
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I'm gonna think it over the next few days.
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Also, she'll have another sad if she gets dropped.
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We're talking FMA levels of "do not try to bring the dead back" here. Plus, as far as I know, once Zecora took over as Composer in WW's (implied) epilogue, Kreu stayed behind as a Reaper. So, yeah.
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I find canon updating helps keep a character fresh so it avoids the problem of stagnation.