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Though seriously, other than concerns about the directions Flare and Luna might go (more Luna than Flare), I do like your Bon Bon (the character I mean. =/) so far. I know playing background/one-shot characters can be tricky, but I think you're doing good.
OOC concerns. Tails doesn't know Flare that well other than having been one of those "Negative Nancys" and with Luna he doesn't know about that thing she did with Zetta.
Hmn. Not too sure how to address those; Flare is just reacting reflexively to whatever comes her way, whereas Luna has a very definitive set of actions planned out for her. If they're both problems, then I'm not sure what exactly the issue at heart is.
Well I was concerned about Flare going down a destructive path, but I think she might be okay since she helped Harv and all (even if they are fighting).
With Luna, I'm a bit concerned she's going down the same path as May!Twi and might turn about into Nightmare Moon or worse.
I can tell you that I have no plans to make Luna go down a path like that. In fact, she's more stable now than she's ever been; whether or not she's "worse" depends on your opinion of Disgaea protagonists, I suppose, but she'll be fully in control of herself and relatively helpful.
I admit the latest thread with Yggy went in a direction I hadn't expected, but that was more a one-time thing, I think.
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Though seriously, other than concerns about the directions Flare and Luna might go (more Luna than Flare), I do like your Bon Bon (
the character I mean. =/)so far. I know playing background/one-shot characters can be tricky, but I think you're doing good.Re: Sword
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With Luna, I'm a bit concerned she's going down the same path as May!Twi and might turn about into Nightmare Moon or worse.
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I admit the latest thread with Yggy went in a direction I hadn't expected, but that was more a one-time thing, I think.