I'll take anon crit. The issues I see in myself are the same ones that have been there -- I don't get him involved enough in day to day happenings to get him hooked into relationships and plots, and I need to canon review again for general voice stuff. I'm trying to give him more 'wins,' but that hasn't been as active of an effort on my part as it needs to be.
Kathryn
I'll take anon crit. The issues I see in myself are the same ones that have been there -- I don't get him involved enough in day to day happenings to get him hooked into relationships and plots, and I need to canon review again for general voice stuff. I'm trying to give him more 'wins,' but that hasn't been as active of an effort on my part as it needs to be.